little dove

Judgement

I am a flower on the floor trampled all over

as if being trampled all over isn't enough

Disrespect and judgement from souls for no reason

So much judgement as if mental illness wasn't hard enough

So much insensitivity when souls are traumatised

for why should I have to deal with judgement when my world is already broken

Why should others behaviour affect me I am still a person

A traumatised mentally ill individual who never chose this

Walking around in confusion and pain scars on my soul

If only people could see the way of there behaviours

The world needs kindness towards those who are suffering

Living next to people who judge me again for the second time

I am dismayed at why they do this for it is unkind

Discrimination against those with mental health is hurtful

Walking around with so much pain, you should not feel shame for this

I have felt like a broken little flower today who feels so much pain

Just for one day I wish there was people who would support me

Instead of the cold judgement , I am still a person just a hurting soul

And if only I was given a break and my dreams could come true

Instead again again I am pushed back into the nightmare

The nightmare not of my choosing,  I only wish dolphins could soothe me

Comments5

  • little dove

    thanks.

  • Heartwriter

    So sorry little dove. People can be cruel. Keep those writes coming. Great job expressing yourself!

    • little dove

      yeah they can be and i will never understand some people
      thankyou

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      BLESSINGS DOVE: ANGELA HERE, It's 9:15 am Wednesday here in New Zealand. You are loved, all your friends on MPS Love you lots & lots. I'm a Physio and a Masseuse and lots of my clients are very low when they come through the Door but Head & Shoulder massages soon puts them at ease. You say you feel neglected and like a trampled Flower and there is nobody there to love and support you, which makes me so so sad! Thanks for sharing your pain, we love and care for you and Brian & I pray for you. Sharing is cathartic and I trust our responses make you feel better. Please let us know. Love & Hugs, Your Sister ANGELA: AMEN ! Please check our Poems ~ Yours A & B.

    • Claudelle DeLuna

      Hope your day gets better as the dawn of a new day awaits, don't lose your faith.
      P.S.
      The one's that disrespect you aren't doing to well they lack empathy. They might be hurting themselves, there is no more cruel human than the one that carries venom.
      I have my only brother that has mental illness and I've experience firsthand what others are capable of doing. May the power of God reign over you.
      Blessings!

    • Poetic Dan

      This was amazing and beautifully sad, you brought back a memory of someone telling me that no one cares about my miserable life and I should just go under a rock and die. At the time I had my pride and thought it washed off, 5 years later it came up 3 months ago when on a healing session for my childhood trauma.

      I must of felt this again because your writing felt so healing. Keep writing from your beautiful heart and you will attract and Manifest what you deserve, theses insensitive fools are blind to their own pain. At least your are true to your, that's bravery in my book.

      Much love and respect

      • little dove

        aaw thankyou very much Dan.
        childhood trauma is very diffficult to deal with any trauma is isn;t it.
        aaw well i am glad that the poem felt healing,
        yes that is how i feel sometimes i walked around every day for so many years facing things that some normal people never have to deal with and then you get people treating you in a horrible or judgemental manner thinking that is fair. just people who add on to our already hurting hearts there behaviours are not needed. exactly some people are extremely insensitive and you wonder why they cant be more sensitive
        thanks

        • Poetic Dan

          We are all on our journey to heal ourselves, just never forget you are as strong as you write.



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