Worse and worse makes it feel like curse
Better and better makes a hug forever.
While talking to my daughter about life
I mistakenly said it only get worse
The seed I heard whispered "I rhyme with curse"
O my days, so you do and I hit reverse and together me and her came up with above verse.
"You can't reap what you don't sow
You can't lead where you won't go
You can't teach what you don't know
I'm using my heart for what hearts are for
All the beauty in this whole life"~ brother Ali (3 different songs)
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Today is my amazing little ladys birthday, 12 today and I'm so greatful to have such amazing kids that knows their dad says everything he thinks and they do the same so our souls are free. We just danced to this song making pancake, enjoy
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That's an awesome verse you both came up with.
I hope she has an amazing birthday 🎉
Thank you thier always reminding to be positive, she's still sleeping while I make a chocolate cake even more chocolaty lol
Yum 🎂
Hope your daughter has a great birthday. You are such a good daddy. She's lucky to have you. Great write!
Thank you so much, I definitely feel the same x
Wishing your daughter a great birthday and her Dad plenty of happy moments with her to remember forever.
Ooo that made me cry 😉
I'm on love overload!
A fine write and cake Dan. Good wishes! 🙂
Thank you kindly
Yeah the boy loved the leftovers at 7am
Hope she enjoys her happy day Dan!
Me too, if not there's plenty more. So far so good thank you for hope that it's a successful day
Dan,
That’s an incredible looking chocolate birthday cake! Chocolate is my favorite!
Wishing your daughter a very Happy Birthday 🎉🎊🎈🎁! Enjoy the day!
Nice poem and that video is amazing! Enjoyed it!
All the best for a beautiful magical day!
~Laura~
Yep shes never drank anything other than water or chocolate shake and it's just as hard with food. Lol
I'm sure it will be a bit more magical now, glad you like the tune. I love her voice and message
...and together with Nahko...the best!!!
A great day in both your lives. Love the music, love the sentiment and knockout verse.
Happy days!
That they are thank you for sharing it with us my friend.
May all our happy days continue arising 😉
Very good write, may your daughter (and son) be filled with the wonder of life and go forward towards their wondrous futures.
Loved the cake and the song.
Thank you my friend and glad you enjoyed the song too, made me think of a writing to write.
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