Between the who we are and the one we strive for

Poetic Dan



I hung my head and cried
Now all my tears are dry
My emotions left feeling high
Over run with my inner design

I know it's the 'who' I want be
Battling the 'who' I don't want to see
Understanding it will never leave
I just need to show it- all it can be
I'm not alone and everything doesn't depend on me.

I'm letting go of my control
Pushing past the told you so
Searching for my inner peace
To rap it up for you all to see
For it resonate through you then back to me

Leaving nothing but balanced harmony
As my tears cleared more soul to see

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 2nd, 2018 08:46
  • Comment from author about the poem: Another wave ridden after I let everything get on top of me this morning. Everyone here and around at the moment are my true inspiration, without all of these Energies I would not be the who that I am born to be.
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  • Views: 29
  • User favorite of this poem: Laura🌻.
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Comments4

  • Laura🌻

    Dan,

    Sending your way all the love and energy I can muster up!

    I love your choice of pic and music...Nahko, of course!

    ~Laura~

    • Poetic Dan

      It was funny you made me think of this one yesterday.

      The energy was received thank you again for always listening.

      • Laura🌻

        You’re welcome...and I’m always here to listen! Anytime!😊

      • orchidee

        A fine write Dan.
        Meanwhile - I dunno if I'm coming or going. Am I 1,2, or 3 people? 'Me, Myself, and I'.
        I will stop digging this hole now, or I will never get out of it! lol.

        • Poetic Dan

          Ha, I know I'm definitely all 3 and made a home in my hole

          • orchidee

            You getting out of that hole? I will pass ya a ladder.

          • Goldfinch60

            May your soul be released into the beauty and the power of its love.
            Good positive write.

            • Poetic Dan

              Loved that line, thank you very much.

            • onepauly

              you surely have the wisdom
              of a great poet.

              • Poetic Dan

                As do well all my friend, thank you very much for saying what I still think I'm unworthy to hear but yet I feel with every fiber of my being.

                • onepauly

                  you deserve praise
                  for your contribution.

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