Crystal Hope

Lovely lilacs

In the distance
a breeze is blowing
to the flowers
pale and glowing.
She clutches each one
close to her beating heart.
Lovely lilacs they are.
Lovely to the color chart.
She glazes afar
with a thought of bliss to share.
As she carries these pale flowers
with tender love and care.

Comments8

  • serenity-poetry

    Aw this is so sweet! I love it and your use of imagery is incredible.

  • Jon Nakapalau

    A very vivid poem that reminds us that beauty is all around if we only look for it.

    • Crystal Hope

      true. thank you for your comment.

    • HangingbyaHalo

      Sweet Little write. Delightful.

    • Claudelle DeLuna

      Great poem, lovely picture!
      Blessings!
      ;)

    • Reyas

      I really loved the flow of the poem, felt like the breeze flowing through all those flowers. The imagery is just perfect, I could see the scene just play out. Another job well done.

      • Crystal Hope

        Thank you so much Reyas. I'm flattered. :)

      • Goldfinch60

        Very good write with good imagery, I can see her in my mind.

      • lcmcfadden

        I love this so very much!

      • 🚂Poetrydelivery

        This piece is most lovely i enjoyed reading it.. 💙💙🙏

        • Crystal Hope

          Thank you for your kindness



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