In the distance
a breeze is blowing
to the flowers
pale and glowing.
She clutches each one
close to her beating heart.
Lovely lilacs they are.
Lovely to the color chart.
She glazes afar
with a thought of bliss to share.
As she carries these pale flowers
with tender love and care.
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Author:
Crystal (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 8th, 2018 16:43
- Comment from author about the poem: Wrote this almost a year ago. Love the color purple.
- Category: Nature
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Comments7
Aw this is so sweet! I love it and your use of imagery is incredible.
Thank You!!!!
A very vivid poem that reminds us that beauty is all around if we only look for it.
true. thank you for your comment.
Sweet Little write. Delightful.
thank you kindly
I really loved the flow of the poem, felt like the breeze flowing through all those flowers. The imagery is just perfect, I could see the scene just play out. Another job well done.
Thank you so much Reyas. I'm flattered. 🙂
Very good write with good imagery, I can see her in my mind.
thank you !
I love this so very much!
thank you! 🙂
This piece is most lovely i enjoyed reading it.. 💙💙🙏
Thank you for your kindness
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