I'm done with my pain but it never goes away
I've just spent two days camping hoping balance was gained
As this world has so much it's hard to take it all in
To hear the children being threatened with violent actions
Seeing toddlers having it screamed they are stupid to their face
I'm feeling me, myself and I in all the energetic vibes
The me who is the projector of all of my fear
Myself that knows the flight absorbed from tears
Then the I that chooses to automatically respond
This new adjustment to align with heart, soul and spirit
Has no limits and with a desire to need everyone in it
I was waiting for you, you was waiting for me
Letting go of our stories to connect deeper within
Putting the 'if' back in life and knowing it starts with us
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Poetic Dan (
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Incredibly written. A fine piece
Thank you I was actually unsure if it made much sense from what had in my head.
Glad it did, much appreciated
When ya coming back? Where ya been?! A nice write Dan.
Cambersands and Hastings, the site was lovely but had to tell the guy next to me to turn down his bass.
Kids had a good time so I'm chuffed
Oh lol, getting nearer October - the annual reunion of Hastings 1066. You can join too - have to be very old, and must have been there in person in 1066! A few of us poets will be there. It's completely nutty of course. lol.
Well I drove over but did not go in, the price was a bit high and the kids were not that fussed.
I'm afraid I've been an outlaw all my lives and never will stay behind anyones bars
Dan,
Thank you for sharing this wonderful write! Nature is life! It fills our soul!
“This new adjustment to align with
heart, soul and spirit”...
“Letting go of our stories to connect deeper within”...
Nice pic and choice of video which I enjoyed very much!
~Laura~
Always a pleasure to read your words and sharing my stories with me
A couple of days under canvas with children can put new life in heart, soul and spirit Dan - lovely pic. of a more relaxed Dad shows you will soon camp out again. Good read and love that positive final line.
That I will and that last line was inspired by a post I read called IF.
Always appreciate your comment
Much love and respect
"This new adjustment to align with heart, soul and spirit " is the way to go into the future in a positive way.
Good write Dan.
Hi ho hi ho, I'll keep up the flow!
Thank you
I'm away camping too... but in the van not brace enough for a tent... says the forest girl lol!
You are so reflective and insightful.
I'm just listening to the pitter patter of rain on the roof having a cuppa before the boys wake up.
The internet is terrible so I can't even get on google docs to do some writing!
If I don't write my soul will fall out 😕
A green space is a green space
I enjoyed the 5am silence
Sadly the ones next to me, brought a boom box with them.
I write in my head, they are never lost just get transformed when you get to but it down.
Have a lovely time
💜
The sense in ya heart dont have to tally with the sense in ya head.. nicely penned and I imagine somewhat refreshing, if not cathartic too............ Neville
Thank you for bring me back to this, I was actually looking for one after reading your piece today!
Just can't remember what it's called lol
it happens...... and if your poem was called it happens.. wouldn't that be spooky eh...
That it would my friend, I found it though! Called his & hers pg 16
Thank you for helping me push myself to go back through and absorb my own thoughts better!
that's what it is all about mate.... N
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