Rose thorns cut deep,
just like the love we couldn’t keep.
tears stream down my face,
oh, what a heartbreaking case.
love truly hurts,
all because you were the flirt
- why doesn’t he love me
-mb
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Author:
A girl with roses (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 15th, 2018 16:20
- Comment from author about the poem: from personal heartache and a love for roses all my poems will have a relation with sadness and roses
- Category: Love
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WELCOME ROSE ~ thanks for your first POEM ~ Fortunately I studied Egyptian Hieroglyphics @ University so was able to translate! Love the structure of the GLYPH ~ rhyming couplets and a nice rhythm. A sad subject ~ unrequited love. Just as Rose thorns cut deep causing tears to flow ~ so love hurts and FLIRTING (with others) is often the cause. Men get hurt by love too ~ but seem to recover quicker. Thinking of you ~ every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check my Poem "Metamorphis form Rose Bud to Blossom" I love all ROSE POEMS ~ Thanks B !
Thank you so much!
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