A cry of more light

Poetic Dan



Our spark of life is gone
Back to where it begun
Second miscarriage
With a woman I adore

I wish I was as strong as my words
Not to fall apart with tears of my heart
But I would love another chance at it all
To bring more light into this world

I don't have it all but what is me
Enough for providing love internally

I'm greatful to the light love ones provide
While I handle this eternal darkness inside

As the poems in my mind play rewinds
The sorrow of letting go again & again

Letting go of my story to read another day
With my soul and spirit I heal my hearts pain
Giving time more time to hear my inner rhymes
Restoring peace as it's all I ever want to be
Right now I'm in an emotional washing machine
Once the cycle is complete I'll continue shining
Harmony and balance from life is all I need
No blame lives in what will be will, Que Sera Sera me, myself and I sing

Thank you universe for listening

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 16th, 2018 09:02
  • Comment from author about the poem: The song say it all. I may not reply on this post but thank all that read and appreciate it as much as you may what me too.
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Comments6

  • sylviasearcher

    đŸ˜Ș💜

  • orchidee

    A sensitive write Dan. It's time to weep. I scolded myself sometimes at some funerals/thanksgiving tribute services, where I did not weep. I suppose though, it depends how close we are to the person.

  • LaurađŸŒ»

    My dear Dan,

    This truly saddens me!

    If you need to cry...cry!
    No matter what, the need to cry is often necessary! Work it through together with your lady! Cry together!
    Embracing life’s difficulties...and this is certainly one of them...is another opportunity for you and your lady to grow even closer together!
    I know you’ll be open to face this loss! In doing so, you will mend that soul!

    As in the song, “Older Chests”...
    “Like a crack in a wall
    Starting small, and grow in time...”
    If that small crack isn’t repaired, it will grow! It needs to be resolved!
    You and your lady need to mend yourselves!
    “Harmony and balance from life is all I need”
    “ No blame lives in what will be will”
    Que serĂĄ serĂĄ!

    Sending an abundance of love your way!

    ~Laura~

  • Christina8

    There are no words. Having gone through it with twins......I just want to say you are doing a super job, Dan!

  • Goldfinch60

    This is so hard Dan but support is out there in many ways. Your words will help you and you know that the light will be there for you.
    Bless you Dan.

  • dusk arising

    No meaningful words of comfort from me today brother man, for none will comfort. Dig deep into your faith and if you can, be her rock for all your tomorrows.



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