Wash it away with me
Cry let it all spill out
Be it from the pain
Of can't it let go
Be it from the love
Trying to hold on
Water cleans it all
Deeper for the soul
Light will be altering
Cracks begin to sing
I am open on my stage
So join and find a way
As we find our own replys
To the points that multiplied
I'm going to send over one last tune that keeps going round in my head.
I hope by now you can see that I deeply mean every word I use and I want to thank you with every atom of my heart, mind and soul.
You said this morning that I'm now not the youngest and in this tune he says "when are you going to write to your older brother" and now you have.
You made me feel like one today and although we have only had a little chat (but deep) it's ripple affect will be amazing you'll see.
As for the first time in my life I will say cheers little brov, I'm glad we're both here.
An extra message I wish to send...
Although his added more fuel to my fire
I want it to be know I welcome any other
All souls are becoming sisters and brothers
As we wash away for a bright tomorrow
I'll stay persistent in an open border
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Yesterday I got a message from a brother I never knew I had, he knew of my older brother and sister but not me. We spent the day texting about our lives and how very similar they have been, today I'm even more grateful to be me. It is brave to reach out not knowing what you'll get but sometimes it's more than you expect.
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And now you know you have that brother! A fine write Dan.
So - see you later. I'm off to stand in a den of lions, to overcome my fears. See ya later, if they don't eat me!
Thank you kindly and just tell them Daniel sent you, you'll be fine. Ooo never really write my full name 😉
Ahh, appropriate name too! heehee.
Daniel Paul Absolom in full lol
Ooh very Biblical!
I know although Paul is short for Pauline after my mum must be why I feel so in touch with the female side of me.
Well, some Biblical writers/scholars call Paul's letters 'The Pauline epistles'. if you were named John, would your mum be named Johannine (Or Joanna - near-ish to it)?!
Dan,
Your heartfelt poem has made me smile.
The effects of your words are truly touching.
A wonderful piece!
I hope you and your new found younger brother grow a bond that lasts forever and may you be blessed with the love and joy it brings
Thank you so much and may this reflect in your life too.
Appreciate your kind words
Much love and respect
Thank you for also helping me see my message I want to send a bit more Clearer. Inspiration for an extra eneding to hopefully start many new beginning
Anytime 🤗
All the best!
Keep writing
i am happy i wrote to you.
Hahaha, glad you came here. Now for you to release and join the soulful tribe that is on my poetic side, to find you are far from alone.
MissKay I'll never stop if you don't!
What a wonderful magical experience Dan! I hope you come to love each other very much! Thanks for the music also - I'm going to look him up and hear more.......
Thank you very much, you and the other L have been just as wonderful to get to know over the years.
When I first heard nahko 6 years ago I knew that the suffering I was about go through again was going to truly change me within. I did a writing called "maybe a song will say it better" inspired by his song love letters to god.
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