If it is the valley I want to see,
To a mountain top I must climb.
If it is the mountain peak I want to see,
Up on a cloud I must go!
If I aspire to understand that cloud,
I will close my eyes and...
think
Think of the past and let it go
Think of the future and let it go
Think of the present and...
live it
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Author:
Lauraš» (
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- Comment from author about the poem: After reading āLife Or Deathā by Kurt Philip Behm, I was inspired to write THINK! Iāve been thinking a lot about the valley where I was born. As the years have gone by, that valley has become more meaningful than ever before. Havenāt thought about it much...until now!
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Comments9
So true we can do nothing about what happened in the past, we do not know what will happen in the future but we do know about now, enjoy every moment of the now.
Andy,
Your comment is very much appreciated and may I add that you are an inspiration!
Love to Joyce and you!
~Laura~
How wonderful your image Laura.... I just adored this one........ I hope you see your valley again.
My dear Lorna,
Thank you for gifting me with your visit to my page. Your comment is a gem! I appreciate your time and read!
~Laura~
A fine write Laura. Will it be cloud nine? heehee.
Naah...9 is overrated and overcrowded! Itāll have to be 3,7, or 13...my lucky #sšš
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Orchi,
Thank you for the visit!
Much appreciated!
~Laura~
Thanks, Laura. I try to 'live it.' It's so much better when i do so.
w c,
Youāre very welcome.
I appreciate your read and comments!
~Laura~
Wow a soaring imaginative muse poem here that challenges us. We need to move and do Sth to achieve it. I like this fine poem. Kudos.
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.
s.zaynab.kamoonpuri,
So sorry for the late response to your wonderful comments which I very much appreciate! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment!
~Laura~
Reminds me of Rudyard Kipling:
If you can fill the unforgiving minute
With sixty secondsā worth of distance run,
Yours is the Earth and everything thatās in it,
Andāwhich is moreāyouāll be a Man, my son!
Kevin,
My sincere apologies for this late response to your wonderful comment which I very much appreciate! Thank you!
~Laura~
reads luverly.. and I could not agree more with your concluding sentiment.. life is indeed for living.. live for now...and live hard... N
Neville,
Thank you for the read and your wonderful comment! Very appreciative!
~Laura~
and truly meant my friend
Neville
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Beautiful piece, there is a lot for us to learn from these wise words.
Caleb,
Thank you for your wonderful comment! Very much appreciated!
~Laura~
Past is gone, you no longer can be
Why waste present for future to be
Live in the present, and live to be free
Of past and future, I totally agree
Suresh,
Thank you for stopping by! I appreciate the read and your wonderful poetic comment!
Happy Sunday!
~Laura~š»
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