I'm going to tell you this
From a boy to a man
I've never thought
I must empty my sack
Any hole is not a goal
Although it may be how
Many get to this world
To hear these makes me sick
One I'll guarantee not to repeat
I'm trying my hardest to keep this clean
As I did the action of creation way before 18
But I always was aware it could bring a mini me
Into a world I felt was cruelly bitter and unseen
So I chose in ever single act
My power I have making life it self
Never to lose it from my mind
Nothing I created will walk the path of mine
Greatful to be here right now
Yet this shadow is mine alone
Knowing it was heavy balls
The reason I got here at all
To every single man out there
I understand the need to share
But grip your own if you can't own
The responsibility of actions alone
Stop being ignorant to the consequences of actions
For a moments satisfaction is another souls damnation
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Not sure if I wrote this as good as I can because there are way to many words and emotions on this subject. That I struggle to get all of my thoughts in a line, as I understand there's no wrong or right but yet what we know and feel inside. Nothing is a mistake or cursed from the start but on a journey to know who we are.
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Comments7
Woof! Be quiet Fido
! (18+ watchdog). Got him on my lead here.
Well, it's a natural human function - apart from my daftness of swooning.
Maybe it's 'everything in moderation'. It's the same if we overdo anything. We may suffer the consequences - over-drinking, over-eating, etc.
Glad help keep Fido busy and thanks for the word swooning, it inspired a writing I've yet to share.
Oh noooo! I bet I will swoon when I read it then. Fido will guard me from anything 'exciting' in it. lol.
Another great piece with such an intricate and important message.
Always good to get confirmation to keep sharing my thoughts.
Truly appreciated
Wise words for the young to heed. But they are tied into human nature and will not learn wisdom by being told. If it were so easy, then even horrific warfare would stop.
Absolutely my friend although I know I tell mine more than I was told but yes it should be shown just as much as we tell.
Always appreciate your words
Much love and respect
words of advice for young people? Although some of us old dogs might learn from it as well.
Always appreciated my friend
Much peace and respect
Enjoyed it, PD. Ahh yes, to know desire and creation!
Always appreciated w c
Much love and respect
try being a 63 year old virgin.
yea, like me!
ha! ha! ha!
I'll have a go in the next life 😉
It's never to late for anything my friend
Much peace and respect
I would rather die then lose my virginity.
it is something I can call my own.
Very strong write Dan but all our actions give us the experience to move on into a better life.
That it did but some things don\'t need to repeat, if you know what I mean?
Always appreciated
Much love and respect
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