Crystal Hope

a world beyond her eyes

a world beyond her eyes
full of adventure and surprise.
one swing after another swing,
nothing knowing what it may bring.

over the horizon near the sun
placing light so fair and so young.
her bare feet in the breezy midair
not a feeling of fear, not even a care.

buildings so sturdy and tall
could not touch an inch of her at all.
she looked out to her dreams and hopes
knowing God was holding the ropes. 


  • ForeverJesus6

    I really enjoyed reading this piece. It was very well put together. I especially liked the last two lines. It was unexpected in a good way.
    Keep writing.
    Persistence is key

  • Liam Allsop

    Extremely good poem you are very talented

    • Crystal Hope

      Thank you Liam. That made my day

    • Goldfinch60

      Very good Faith filled write Crystal.

    • D. K. Heqet

      Loved the flow! Great poem!

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