sylviasearcher

ShhhHaiku

Silence strangled shouts

Paced peaceful persecution

Grasping gorging. Gone

 

Comments5

  • orchidee

    A fine write Sylvia. I too did a poem on 'Sshhh' but no one heard it. I whispered it! doh! lol.

    • sylviasearcher

      That's the trouble with silence I guess 🤐

    • Laura🌻

      Sylvia,

      A great write with an awesome alliteration! There’s a lot going on within those nine words!
      At first I read it as if it were a nightmare where one is screaming without making a sound sound.
      On the second read, another thought came to mind because of today...
      September 11, 2001🖤
      On a peaceful, beautiful morning...PEACE was compromised and silenced many!

      ~Laura~

      • sylviasearcher

        Thank you Laura.

        It was written as a personal expression but equally to resonate with wider socio-political sentiments.

        The 9/11 connection was not intended but you are right that it fits perfectly.

        Perhaps there is more to all this poetry than we know?

        • Laura🌻

          I think there is!

        • Goldfinch60

          Very good clever write Sylvia.

          • sylviasearcher

            Thank you for your kind words

          • Candlewitch

            hello!

            I got the same impressions as Laura! a great and humbling piece of work!

            *hugs, Cat

          • Neville

            I could gorge on haiku any day of the week.... blink.... feels good.. N



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