Silence strangled shouts
Paced peaceful persecution
Grasping gorging. Gone
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sylviasearcher (
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A fine write Sylvia. I too did a poem on 'Sshhh' but no one heard it. I whispered it! doh! lol.
That's the trouble with silence I guess 🤐
Sylvia,
A great write with an awesome alliteration! There’s a lot going on within those nine words!
At first I read it as if it were a nightmare where one is screaming without making a sound sound.
On the second read, another thought came to mind because of today...
September 11, 2001🖤
On a peaceful, beautiful morning...PEACE was compromised and silenced many!
~Laura~
Thank you Laura.
It was written as a personal expression but equally to resonate with wider socio-political sentiments.
The 9/11 connection was not intended but you are right that it fits perfectly.
Perhaps there is more to all this poetry than we know?
I think there is!
Very good clever write Sylvia.
Thank you for your kind words
I could gorge on haiku any day of the week.... blink.... feels good.. N
Blink
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