I drew a line in the sand
and said you can't go past that,
but all this wind
has blown the line thin
And soon, I think
I'll lose control.
Now I can't save your heart...
or my own.
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Author:
Medusx (
Offline) - Published: September 16th, 2018 13:39
- Comment from author about the poem: I think I know what I want now, but...it's a bad idea. I miss that day at the beach, before we knew, before you had to leave. I wish I didn't miss you so much, but I know I won't forget you. I can't forget you. I promise.
- Category: Love
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Comments4
WELCOME LBC ~ Thanks for your first Poem 'n Picture. Love letters & Love lines in the sand something we can all empathise with ! As a Man I always say "Better to have Loved & Lost than never to have Loved at all" ~ but I know that's easier for Men to say than Ladies ! I hope you can pick up the pieces and redraw the LINE. Im OK at the moment and I share my site with my fiancee ANGELA. MPS works my mutually reading & commenting on each others sites ~ OK. Please check mine ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
WELCOME LBC ~ Thanks for your first Poem 'n Picture. Love letters & Love lines in the sand something we can all empathise with ! As a Man I always say "Better to have Loved & Lost than never to have Loved at all" ~ but I know that's easier for Men to say than Ladies ! I hope you can pick up the pieces and redraw the LINE. Im OK at the moment and I share my site with my fiancee ANGELA. MPS works my mutually reading & commenting on each others sites ~ OK. Please check mine ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
very poignant in its message. The line can be redrawn, but the heart, well, I don't know... humans can be tricky... well done... enjoyed it.
Wow I really love all the feedback I'm getting here! Most of my friends don't even know I write, so it's really nice being able to share and hear some opinions on it
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