Pup Tents
Back then we camped out
And slept in our pup tents
Two slept in each one
And we became good friends
We each had a sleeping bag
And slept on it in summer
And many good times we had
Sharing space with each other
All had opportunity
To search around the camp
And there were many trails
We took when given the chance
At night we built a campfire
And roasted frankfurters there
With some stories told
Of legends that often scared
Each night we zipped our tents
With the memories we made
And couldn’t wait for dawn
And another day
- Author: w c ( Offline)
- Published: September 19th, 2018 19:13
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments2
We are separated by a common language - had to look up pup tents - now I know. Then looked up weenies and its baby talk for the male willy - can't be right - ah there is - well it makes sense - a small sausage.
All this apart I enjoyed the write.
Thanks, Michael. I appreciate your effort to understand the poem. It's so easy to write from one's perspective with little concern for vocabulary used.
I often use Language which I have to explain to American friends - it's what adds to sites like this. So keep writing as I will.
Good write w c.
Thanks, orchidee.
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