Edthepoet

Loving you feels like...

I use to climb some
Heights Inside my mind
I thought I'd escape
The hands of time

I use to see some
Sights from up that high
I thought I'd escape
The tears they cried

Then I met you and
Began to see why
I'd climbed such great heights
In my minds eye 

Yeah I met you and
Began to realise
Why the tears I tried to
Hide had run dry

Because..Loving you feels like
Forever falling
Forever falling without
A place to crash land

Yes Loving you feels like
Forever falling
Forever falling until you
Hold out your hands

Then loving you feels like
Forever flying
Forever flying like a
Mercy cry from the damned

Yeah loving you feels like
Forever flying
Forever flying like an
Angel from the promise land

 

Comments4

  • chaaz

    that is truly beautiful

    • Edthepoet

      Cheers Chaaz

    • dusk arising

      Epic Ed. I'd say this was a different style and approach for you. It's going in my favourites. The emotions really come thru in your words.

      • Edthepoet

        Hey dusk, thank you man. This one's a song lyric, which would explain the different style. I normally don't post lyrics but thought I would this time.

        • Edthepoet

          Also you and your mps friends should check out the poetry of the user 'psentinel'. He's on another level. Support him regardless of whether he replies to comments or reads other peoples poetry.

        • David De La Cruz

          Dude awesome words.... Great poem...

        • Goldfinch60

          Very good emotive write, may that promised land be always there for you.



        To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.