5am trigger 7am Beach walk

Poetic Dan



The sun rises
Showing again
Working of
My inner brain

My anger is
In myself
Others show
What I don't know

All of this
From a
Light
Left
On

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 5th, 2018 01:38
  • Comment from author about the poem: Last night while watching TV. The boy fell asleep on settee. I woke him up and left the hall light on. At 5am it Wakes me up. My brain starts getting annoyed. Can people not do what's right in front of them! With reflection I see that this is actually me. All things I know I should be actually doing. This should of been another poem....
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  • orchidee

    You had that beach walk? Or is it a walk in your dreams?!

    • Poetic Dan

      Lol no that was me an hour ago

    • dusk arising

      Odd yet pleasing how interruptions to our daily pattern can lead to self examination and questioning.
      I imagine your morning stroll was a meditation. I love the coast, alone with those crashing elements of raw nature levels me.

      • Poetic Dan

        Odd but pleasurable... Thank you I shall store that line, when I struggle keep seeing my own shortcomings.
        Yes once I reached the sea it all became clear to me, wash it away and be thankful to breathe.

      • Goldfinch60

        Those oddities in our lives do cause us to look at things in a different way. Those ways are new experiences and experience in life is always good.
        As for the light, it is always there in our lives.

        • Poetic Dan

          3 is the magic number.
          Thank you again Andy



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