Notice of absence from Jooles
I disappear for months on end......just my life but I always come back!
I disappear for months on end......just my life but I always come back!
Calling all angels we need your guidance
Life's slipping away into gradual subsidence
The Earth once was new and full of potential
Now treated like trash as if not needed, essential
Calling all Angels your wisdom please share
There's a hole in this world, a massive great tear
We hurt and we wound and we no longer care
It's even to much to give, to share
Calling all Angels your patience to be learned
As humans our forgiveness needs to be earned
Were we always so cruel, is it just in our fibre
Or have we made us this way, doomed to expire
- Author: Jooles ( Offline)
- Published: October 5th, 2018 14:47
- Comment from author about the poem: Wee reflective poem for a Friday night
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 21
Comments5
This is such a wonderful poem! I really enjoyed it. I think this precisely what our world needs. We need hope and we have to call all the angels to help us. We particularly need their wisdom, their sympathy, their help... Thank you so much for this poem! It is so inspiring...
Thank you for the lovely comments. I agree we need something
Very good and very true write. Homo sapiens has created this world that is slowly dieing.
Yes we have, killing the world and each other 😣
Great job..it seems like that when you live in a populated city..I am from Albuquerque no which has a million people..I moved to Carson city nv a year ago..and I cannot believe how kind people here are..only 70,000. you are probably an Earth Angel yourself Hun...look up Th e you tub video..it's like 31 signs that you are an earth angel...something like that..I AM ONE , AS I MATCHED ALL OF THEM
Oh I will look it up, what a lovely thought to be an Earth Angel. I live in Scotland and although we have our issues and are without shame and blame, some of the stories from around the world terrify me. Thanks for the comments.
So much truth in your well-thought out poem. Great read. Thanks for posting. 🙂
Thank you for the kind comments
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