Through all my relationships I've given all my love
Little did I know that in heart aches it would grow
To the point I see that I've never truly loved myself
Living abandoned thinking no one can handle me
I've got to the this point where guilt and regret are free
As I'm accepting all the choices of my lifes path
I'm slowly letting go of attachments to all living souls
To respond with an ability that has no hidden goals
That I need no ones energy to regulate my own
Within my tears are the many treasures I hold
As I truly accept and appreciate all of this world
Nothing is caged and free to walk unconditionally
Thankful to every women for the love you showed
To know what strength is needed to feed a soul
This must be why it's your womb creation grows
As I emotionally detach from mother, brother, sister and lover
Just like my children's cored was cut to find new love
Given unconditionally when the first breath is taken
This was written the day after sending an emotional video
Finishing the last Lines on a morning Pack walk
I received a message on my hand that felt warm
Thank you universe for the stars and birds above
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Poetic Dan (
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Dan,
Powerful my friend...truly powerful!
Loved your write in its entirety!
“Thank you universe for the stars and birds above.”
...and thank you for being YOU!
~Laura~
Thank you for seeing me and I feel blessed to know you.
Thank you for sharing your message Dan, and thanks for being you! Sending peace and prayers. Christina
Right back at you, glad you are you to share our stories together knowing the love we need is right here.
May that peace you send come back to you.
Much love and respect
Dan, i am so in tune to your words today. The you you describe is where i am at - at last! Casting off all need for approval and accepting who i am whilst trying to live in harmony with all and everything. Like you, my shared past is my treasure and it is indeed treasured. Not backward looking though, the future is mine, in harmony.
A great write today. Thank you, gave me a buzz.
As did your words my friend, today has been a wonderful day of fully accepting myself. With the reflection from you to know that this kind of selfishness is the one that helps everyone grow, to need no approval is to put no restrictions on others.
"The future is mine, in harmony"
Perfectly said
A powerful, thought-provoking piece as always Dan! Each of these poems allow us to walk in your feet, to an extent, and reflect upon the ideas you present. Sometimes to grow closer to others, we need to grow closer to ourselves first.
Always a pleasure to read your words my friend. "sometimes to grow closer to others, we need to grow closer to ourselves first" that's a keep my friend and I'll make sure when I quote it to pay homage to you.
Thank you
You have come a long way Dan, may your journey be filled with love and joy.
That's is becoming my friend
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