A Poem To You

Gabriella

Every Time I Look In Your Eyes 

My Heart Flies A Million Miles Away 

My Grey Skies Turn Bright Blue 

You Were The Glue That Held Me Together

Your The Love Of My life 

  • Author: Gabriella (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 12th, 2018 16:26
  • Comment from author about the poem: To the love of my life
  • Category: Love
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  • Goldfinch60

    Good loving write.

    • Gabriella

      Thank you

    • dusk arising

      Ouch at the contrasting past tense in line four! Is this looking back at a lost love (past tense) or glorifying in a present love (all other lines are in present tense). Confusing.

      • Gabriella

        Glorifying in the present kinda it was when I was going through dark spot that person held me together



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