Trust
Such a clumsy word
Clumsy me
To trip over my tongue
Fall face flat
Into a place I no longer belong
Because here the skies are pink
My hair bleach blonde
A person I used to be
Singing the same old songs
Saying stupid girl
How could you be so wrong
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Author:
AfairlyUselessFairy (
Offline) - Published: October 23rd, 2018 06:58
- Comment from author about the poem: This tells a little more about me than my other work, criticism is welcome as I’d love to improve my work further
- Category: Friendship
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Comments1
A really engaging piece which I enjoyed reading. Very bravely you've asked for criticism to help improve your work and there is little I can offer but if you'd like me to make a few minor suggestions just let me know and I'll send you a PM.
Hi sorry, I haven’t been using the website long, I don’t know how to PM
If you click on anyone's name you'll get their public profile - click on the contact icon and you can send them a Private Message. If you receive a PM you'll get notice of it in your inbox also you will get an email.
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