I’m lost and I can’t find my way back , forever searching forever looking for the light lookin for the exit but never finding trapped inside a maze trapped inside my thought forever trapped forever finding trying to find the light to lead me out of the darkness I’m lost I’m lost words I don’t quite understand I don’t quite know what to say what to do trapped forever trapped not knowing what turn to make is it left or is it right forever lost forever stuck
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singingbird (
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This worked well. The absence of punctuation heightened that anxious breathless feeling. I felt lost.
Great introduction.
WELCOME SINGINGBIRD ~ Thanks for our first POEM. It seems rather paradoxical that A SINGINGBIRD ~ should be trapped in a Cage and too sad & disorientated to SING ! We can empathise because it happens (from time to time to all of us !). Some times its our own fault ~ sometimes Society ! I thank GOD I have never been trapped for long ~ BUT with "A little help from my Friends & Family & God ~ I have always broken FREE and Im FREE today ! Thinking of you thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN MPS works by reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ Please visit our site. You can also build up a cohort of MPS FRIENDS ~ OK
nothing resonates within me that i can relate
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