A future come to be
a past Forgiven.
Here on one knee
I want to ask the question
Who am I to me?
A past forgotten
a path forgotten
a future lost
a future coming
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Forgiven past (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: There isnt much i can say besides this is my first poem......it sux but i hope it says a lot and I would like to hear what the poem means to you and what u think it means to me. Dont bother picking around with the grammer and the structure. I didnt go for any type of poem nor did i spend time on ryme or anything for thay matter, but it got the point across well, i think.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments4
Your future is there before you, every obstacle your conquer adds to your experience, every smooth path you travel is a joy. Enjoy every moment.
Welcome to MPS.
Thanks for welcoming me and for your input. I am surprised you pulled so much from the little I provided.
A fine write Forgiven.
To me forwards to our future we must forgive ourselves our past, not dwell on what might have been but fucus in what could still be.
Welcome.
To me it sounds like hope coming from sorrow.
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