Sensitive

Poetic Dan



From the moment we arrive and that cord is cut
We become separate to interact with this world
Some things will attract us others will repel

 I am a soul Embodied, for this vessel is mine and the only property that I will ever truly own.

Within this respect for my own body I strive to show the same to all living things, but there is blood on my hands for in the past I did not give it.

We all invade each others space as we pass through
But misunderstanding occurs when it's personal
For the physical touch should never be overlooked
We are all magnificent sensitive beings craving to touch

In the connection we find what lives at our core
When we choose to interact and get a response
For we are the provider and receiver of love
For this is in my mind before I think to touch

You can take all my family, food, house or clothes
But nothing can ever take the skin over this soul

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 31st, 2018 07:39
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Comments4

  • Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

    Yes, your words speak truth, "Some things attract, others repel."

    Throughout life we are given choices and we alone must choose either right or wrong.

    Great reflective poem. Thanks for sharing. 🙂

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you ever so much, always a pleasure to connect.

    • Goldfinch60

      So true, our souls can never be taken.
      We try our best with our lives and you are obviously moving forward in the right way.

      • Poetic Dan

        Yes this is written because of a disagreement and yet I find myself unable to just put that in words straight forward.
        Thank you for your time as always

      • Laura🌻

        Dan,

        Misunderstandings do occur! The most serious ones cause a lot of pain! It takes a long time for repairs...if they’re worth repairing!
        You’re spot on with...
        “nothing can ever take the skin over this soul”...
        Wishing you love and peace during your very personal journey!

        ~Laura~

        • Poetic Dan

          Thank you so much and I wish you the same on your personal journey. I feel you understand the meaning behind this and hope have the respect you deserve.
          Much love x

        • Lorna

          There is so much going on in everyone's heads it's an absolute miracle when misunderstandings don't happen isn't it Dan. People are hard to figure......

          • Poetic Dan

            We are as complex as the universe, all I wish for is not to have my space invaded and more so for us all to be aware when we do....



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