Voltage

TrystanBehm

 

The closer I got to her

The more erect my hair stood

Rippling waves of tingling

Coursing through my veins

 

The sensation counter intuitive

The fight or flight button off

The magnetism just pulling

My own fear dissipating

 

I reached my hand out

Not sure if I would be shocked, or glued

Contact was made, shots rang through me

A burst of lightning, but from the inside out

 

My grip getting tighter

Desiring more intensity

How much could my heart take?

Or was my heart the epicenter

       

        - The source reciprocating its mate?

  • Author: TrystanBehm (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 15th, 2018 07:58
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
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  • Laura🌻

    Trystan,

    “Rippling waves of tingling
    Coursing through my veins”

    While reading these words, I remember clearly the indescribable sensation! You’ve threaded your words so brilliantly that you’ve succeeded to get this reader to easily remember such feelings! Incredible indeed!

    I think your heart was the epicenter!
    An excellent write! Thank you for sharing!

    ~Laura~

    • TrystanBehm

      Laura,

      Thank you for the comment! My writing is usually a little more ambiguous or cryptic - but this feeling - it was just too raw and real to not just state plainly. I love that you felt it! I hope everyone gets to feel this way at at least once in their life!

      • Laura🌻

        You’re welcome!

        Yes, I hope so too!
        It’s a feeling one never forgets...no matter how old we get! It stays buried within us until a poem such as yours comes along and resuscitates it...then a flood of memories take over for a while...until next time!

      • Goldfinch60

        That feeling is so well portrayed in your words Trystan. It is a feeling that happens so rarely but is never forgotten.



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