The Pyramid of Longing
It
was while
out exploring her
that my lips accidentally
stumbled upon the tiny hidden pulse
buried deep within the hollow of her ankle
It was surely then my dear friend that I realised
I want and need and long to forever be your lover....
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: it is what it say's on the tin............
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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging gift of words.. They are very much appreciated.. Neville
May that love increase like the pyramid that you have created. Clever write Neville.
That love to which these words refer, was a very long time ago now my friend... N
A triangle of romantic angles built on tender reflections of the journey love takes to all hidden places.....I am real glad I caught up with this sizzling read........... x
thank you dear Fay.. I'm glad you found these words too.... N x
This was not a scribble, and it may have been a long time ago, but the memory of it is as fresh in your mind, as if it happened only an instant ago.
You have and will continue to CHEERISH them forever...
How very kind, thank you..
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