SOME BRIDGES ARE BEST LEFT UNABRIDGED !
ANCIENT Bridge crossed deep exotic flowing Gorge
HOPEFULLY I journied knowingly ~ less marginally near !
ONE point ~ quadrate right side ~ The .............
UNABRIDGED ? Very wise ! Xyloid youthful ZEAL !
ZEAL ~ You xyloidically would vapidly upset.
The success ~ RALPH quoted philosophically !
ONE never makes lucky KARMA ~ judicially in haste
GO FORWARD exercising due care ~ BE ADVENTUROUS !
Thanks for visiting ~ Comments Welcome ~ Love BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡
This POEM is dedicated to the Adorable ANGELA !
POEMS which involve the ALPHABET really are called
ABCDarian ! There are many different structures. WORD
Poems (as above) are difficult to compose because you
cannot use Definite or Indefinite articles (only one or two)
and pronouns etc. My poem is NOT perfect it is just an
example in Progress ! Please suggest alternative words.
XYLOID = Wooden (Stubborn)
VAPID = Isipid
KARMA = Destiny
QUADRATE = Agree
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Author:
ANGELA & BRIAN (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 30th, 2018 02:39
- Category: Reflection
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Comments6
And (this) Becomes Certainly, Doubtlessly, Excellent Form Given Here In poem. Arggh, I gave up at J. Me poor attempt!
Thanks UNCLE STEVE ~ It is not an easy form to write ~ you need a large vocabulary and imagination. I believe there should be two complementary facets of a good Poem. 1. The STRUCTURE ~ Sonnet ~ Haiku ~ villanelle etc. 2. the SUBJECT ~ Thank you ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
BUENAS DIAS OSO GRANDE : Good Morning Big Bear : I enjoyed your Poem and it almost made sense. Loved the Picture of the Bridge in Question : There are lots of RICKITY BRIDGES in New Zealand ! If your Bridge can take a Donkey you should be OK ! Love DEAN MARTIN and the Video : thanks for the dedication ! Te adoro tambien !
Abrazos y Besos : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
HOLA LA MIA ANGELA PRECIOSA ~ Pleased you liked it ~ It is not an easy form to write. I encountered some very dodgy Rope Bridges when I was in NZ ~ to be avoided ! Pleased the Poem almost made sense ~ You should try one for yourself ! Todi de mi AMOR ~ Besos y Abrazos Tu Precioso Oso Grande ~ BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Far be it for me to suggest alternatives - pretty darn good as it is.
Excellent just as it is dear Brian - - the word meaning stubborn - i.e. xyloid is the one of three I never knew so thank you for something learned today - good rhyming too and I loved that ol' crooner Dean Martin's number. Bridges are worth extra viewing in exotic words.
Thanks FAY I love WORDS and this style of STRUCTURE requires a large vocabulary that includes lots of Q's V W's and X Y Zed's. I rate Dean Martin ~ very highly pleased you enjoyed it ! I am always fascinated by BRIDGES ~ Yours as always BRIAN
Brian, I agree with Michael and Fay. There is no need for improvement as it's fine just the way it is.'
The bridge in the image should make us aware that taking a chance to get to the other side may sometimes be dangerous.
Thanks for sharing. 🙂
Large vocabulary and imagination - that leaves me out then! Doh! Does it?
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