thoughts

Brooke Snyder

thoughts

constant thoughts

constantly building pressure in my head

like a balloon filling with air

ready to just...pop

 

i can't organize each thought so they all blend into a disgusting flavor

that just rots in my brain

 

a never ending hoarding of unpleasant memories

that soon destroys my present day life

 

it never stops.

i can't think

but i'm also thinking ever moment the clock ticks

 

i no longer have control

a monster has claimed my mind 

and im just in it's body.

  • Author: Brooke Snyder (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 30th, 2018 17:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: sometimes our minds overflow and we don't know how to handle all of the damage, don't let it take control, don't let it rip you apart.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 14
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Comments2

  • alivia

    stuck inside your own body too? I love this one.

  • Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

    Your words make us realize when problems relating to the thought process, such as you've outlined in your poem, occur then it's time to take a few minutes to just relax or meditate.

    Some people take herbal teas, like lavender, oatstraw or chamomile.

    Your poem is nicely written. 🙂



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