Theta was here, greeting anyone and everyone he met. Greeting everyone differently for everyone is different, but there is nothing wrong with that.
A villanelle
Made imperfect yet still beautiful
Don’t think twice about life dear one
Live it to the fullest before life stands still
Grasp the concept and grasp your will
We are all born under the sun
Made imperfect yet still beautiful
Sure there are downs but they’re well worth the ups
So make golden memories hopefully a ton
Before life goes still and has its final stop
So forge your life until you have had your fill
Make memories of friends overall have fun
Made imperfect yet still beautiful
You must persevere when you’re sad or ill
Yearn for quitting these thoughts you should shun
Experience it all before life goes still
So rise my child and walks life's hill
I hope you look back and and have seen a nice run
Because you are flawed and yet still beautiful
And I hope you noticed before time stood still
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Author:
Ernie (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 5th, 2018 12:18
- Comment from author about the poem: As always feedback is always welcome. have a wonderful day and or evening. -Theta the whimsical scholar PS: Humbug
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My final piece for my English assignment. A villanelle a quiet interesting and yet somewhat agitating write.
Theta, your words are tranquil and bring about a sense of relaxation in the reader. You offer such great advice in poetic form.
These lines you've written, "We are all born under the sun
Made imperfect yet still beautiful" should make all of us appreciate a higher power.
What a wonderful write and a great learning experience. Thanks for sharing. 🙂
Thank you for the kind words Tamara. I probably would have never wrote this if not for my english assignment. I'm glad i can do something that I'm familiar with such as poetry. It's not much of a hobby but mostly something to make me feel productive. Its more like scratching an itch of some sorts. But again i'm glad whenever someone or anyone for that matter enjoy my writing
Not the easiest of forms but you've cracked it - enjoyed the read and congrats.
Thank you for the kind words Micheal
Wow this poems message somewhat chimes with mine in positive notes . you poetically inspire with motivating words and say in beautiful flow and rhythm which lends it eloquence. Kudos.
Pleez do review/add your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too . I like meeting new poets and their poems.
Thank you for the kind and generous words. I look forward to meeting your poems never heard someone say it that way. If you like this poem you can check out my other ones i only like a select few of my old poems
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