Birthday Candles, shooting stars
Eleven elevens,
I wish for you and only you
Your sound, your smell
It has yet to come true
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Author:
KK Collins (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 9th, 2018 22:37
- Comment from author about the poem: This was one of my first poems, I know it sucks, it is the first one I'm posting on this site, hoping posting my poems finally will help me.
- Category: Love
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I don’t think this poem sucks. In five short lines you said a lot and that’s not always easy to do. Posting my poems has helped me a lot. I think there’s a certain vulnerability you overcome when you put your thoughts and poems out there. I think you’re off to a great start 🙂 AWESOME poem, “sucks” isn’t in our vocabulary on here. I look forward to reading more of your stuff!
Thank you! I look forward to sharing more of my poems on here, and hope you enjoy them!
It is a fine poem. I hope your wish comes true.
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