I've taken my misery down to the sea
As my anger wants no company
My emotions are my responsibility
Right now they're out of control in me
There's no way I should really be driving
This vessel is slowly malfunctioning
Now I sit trying to get a system reboot
As this attitude doesn't want to move
I cause all these problems this I know
But I did it my way till the end of the show
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Poetic Dan (
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Dan,
Your honesty is admirable!
You did it your way, but it’s NOT
“the end of the show”!
You’re in control! Your show will go on the way you want it to. You love life! You will get through the rough patches! I repeat...YOU’RE IN CONTROL!
You WILL go on!
~Laura~
All of our shows will end one day and until then my tears will continue to pen. Thank you for the light you provide as always x
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Oh Dan I agree with Laura...... it's the honesty and "responsibility" of your thoughts in this poem that make it so wonderful..... I just love it.
Always appreciated and feels like you spoil me thank you so much for seeing what you see in me.
Correction to this amazing write - your show can still go on my friend - on and on............. and on. An excellent piece of rhyme.
Thank you, it will go on for as long as it does I will continue to try and love all the dark with the light. Easier with a rhyme a day.
The end of one show only clears the way for the show that is always with us and will be there for eternity. Keep looking at that light, it will guide you along the right path.
I hold all options open to that my friend but am definitely trying to make the most out of what I have and can get. Thank you as always for your thoughts and seeing me
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