New Day - Haiku to Senryu.

Goldfinch60



The grey dawn arose,

A hole appeared in the clouds,

The bright sun shone through.

 

 

Light entered our lives,

Lifting us from the darkness,

Into life’s beauty.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 29th, 2018 02:06
  • Comment from author about the poem: The first one is a haiku (nature and seasons). The second one is a senryu (emotions) both are 5-7-5.
  • Category: Haiku
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  • orchidee

    Fine writes Gold.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Orchi.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Encouraging combination Goldi in this seasonal tribute to a new day's blessings.

      • Goldfinch60

        Most kind Fay, thank you.

      • Neville

        a brace of em eh' a real treat.. domo arigato.... N

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Neville, my pleasure.

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ Combo of Miles & Summertime ~ stunning ~ thanks for lifting our SPIRITS ! Love the H to S morph ~ Natural to Spiritual ~ very effective ! Blessings & Love to Joyce & Yourself ~
          BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you for your kind comments A and B.



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