She entered this world at the end of the year
To Brighton it up with her sweet tender cheer
With all my gratitude I can't believe I'm here
To be in love and loved by someone so clear
Lucidity came within a mind reflecting mine
For moments we travelled stopping space & time
Laying together just lost in a simple flicker of light
So many colours dance each time we close our eyes
Entwined deeply from an embrace of many lives
This day of celebrations may come only once a year
But every minute I'm lucky to have my forfinya here
As twelve thousand, seven hundred and seventy-four days have passed
This universe now knows on this seventy-fifth light of her life
How wonderful this all is with you in the world.
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I hope everyone has had a great time and ready to be breaking patterns for another new year, to find all the things you hold dear.
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Good words Dan, may you life continue to be filled with love.
Thank you my friend and may this next year pass Pleasant and harmonious for you and loved ones.
A fine write Dan.
Much appreciated and hope this year's last day is good to you.
I have never found it easy reciting any of my work in public.. to attempt it on camera, is almost impossible to comprehend.. and here is a guy who is quite used to talking for hours on end in front of several hundred people... So for the simple fact you did something I would not even attempt, and you did it so well, I salute you sir.... I also thought your poem was a great way to demonstrate your depth of feeling for another.... peace and all good things, Neville
They say life starts outside our comfort zone and I'm going to do my second open mic night end of this month. I'm bricking it, I cry every time but I've been asked and to be honest it's something I'd love to do.
And I never know which ones to pick 😉
I'm taking you commenting on this one means I should not listen to the past of me that wants to stay hidden!
Cheers buddy!
Just keep doing what you obviously do well & what you want to do better, as well... N
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