Taken

sylviasearcher

Soul wanders Moorwards.

Lingering, wondering when

Seen. Pulled. Thrust. Taken.

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  • Neville

    sometimes.. words make one ache so very tenderly...

    • Aislinn Wilson

      How beautifully said. I couldn't respond to this poem any better. I agree.

      • Neville

        My pleasure Aislinn... N

        • sylviasearcher

          Thank you for aching tenderly at my words. I didn't realise words of mine could do that!

          • Neville

            some words can do just that...

          • whisperingquill

            So much said in so few words
            Multilayered with many different meanings
            Astounding write my friend. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ’«

            • sylviasearcher

              Yes for a woman of many many words, sometimes I can appreciate wheness is more.

            • Aislinn Wilson

              This makes me homesick for a place I've never been.

              • sylviasearcher

                Then I think you felt what I felt πŸ–€

              • Michael Edwards

                A special piece of work Sylvia

                • sylviasearcher

                  Thanks Michael. It just emerged from a sensation I was having.

                  I get these funny episodes. I've learned they usually pass.

                • psychofemale

                  what type of poem would this be classified as, just curious? πŸ™‚ thanks

                  • sylviasearcher

                    Well I don't like to open up the whole senyru/ haiku debate.

                    Hence I did not name it as such.

                    We could debate it but I think I'd stay on the fence as I'm not too interested in categorisation.

                    I never got my poetic licence lol πŸ™ƒ

                    • Michael Edwards

                      Well it's classic 575 and it has a human aspect - I would put it into the senryu envelope

                      • sylviasearcher

                        I suppose I always include some natural element in my senyru/haiku because I am compelled to always root humans in nature (moorwards) or use nature's msraphors but the topic is human. I was reading an article about it the other day.

                        And think on balance you are right.



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