I think of the people who like to make a rhyme
Some find it a little tricky to get it all in time
While others feel it is their quest to get it all off their chest
To want nothing more than express every thought they get
Not even knowing what's next just need to let rip
Even if you go off your flow you can bring it back in a mo
For this is our show and validation to be known
Nothing can come back but like an echo in a cave
It travels dimensions to make rippling waves
As this energetically emotional driven force is life
The love
The chaos
The dark
The light
To all those that write that I'll never see
Your passion is why I keep up my beat
For when a wave hits you must let it flow
Joining in Consciousness to become.....
Who knows!
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I hear these words in an over posh English voice, I tried to record but to many mistakes.... Maybe one ;) Thank you to all in here and I'm gutted I don't have the time to read as many as I once did but I hope everyone keeps doing it!
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Twas a great write and rhythm and beat was top notch as were the words. Keep up the great work.
- T
Delightful reply dear friend
Thank you with no end
I Climb next to you
A beat kept in tune!
Fine write Dan -- a writer's passion needs an outlet for as this verse states the result is a flow towards consciousness - worth all the efforts of yielding methinks. Great read.
I feel you see there is no reason but a reason, a result none the less. Thank for a wonderful comment, may this year bring many things with bliss
Good write Dan, we all write for differing reasons and get our words on the page is so important - and wonderful.
As wonderful as many writing of yours have been my friend. Thank you
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