Recovery rhyme and to thank all of life

Poetic Dan

I think of the people who like to make a rhyme

Some find it a little tricky to get it all in time

While others feel it is their quest to get it all off their chest

To want nothing more than express every thought they get

Not even knowing what's next just need to let rip

Even if you go off your flow you can bring it back in a mo

For this is our show and validation to be known

Nothing can come back but like an echo in a cave

It travels dimensions to make rippling waves

As this energetically emotional driven force is life

The love

The chaos

The dark

The light

To all those that write that I'll never see

Your passion is why I keep up my beat

For when a wave hits you must let it flow

Joining in Consciousness to become.....

 

Who knows!

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 10th, 2019 13:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: I hear these words in an over posh English voice, I tried to record but to many mistakes.... Maybe one ;) Thank you to all in here and I'm gutted I don't have the time to read as many as I once did but I hope everyone keeps doing it!
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  • User favorite of this poem: Netashi.
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Comments3

  • Netashi

    Twas a great write and rhythm and beat was top notch as were the words. Keep up the great work.
    - T

    • Poetic Dan

      Delightful reply dear friend
      Thank you with no end
      I Climb next to you
      A beat kept in tune!

    • Fay Slimm.

      Fine write Dan -- a writer's passion needs an outlet for as this verse states the result is a flow towards consciousness - worth all the efforts of yielding methinks. Great read.

      • Poetic Dan

        I feel you see there is no reason but a reason, a result none the less. Thank for a wonderful comment, may this year bring many things with bliss

      • Goldfinch60

        Good write Dan, we all write for differing reasons and get our words on the page is so important - and wonderful.

        • Poetic Dan

          As wonderful as many writing of yours have been my friend. Thank you



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