Falling Fast

Here I go again...









afraid to open up this parachute, because I'm afraid it will be broken

afraid I won't land safe


but hey, what the hell, I'll give it a shot

I'll try to open it...


at least I'll know I tried

and that I wasn't too scared to find out the truth

that's just how it is for me and you


I always fall hard, and you're never there to catch me

I thought it would be different this time, I thought you had changed

I was finally happy...


and then you dropped me like a bomb

and yeah I landed safe and sound



but in p i e c e s


  • Goldfinch60

    Very good emotive write. One day there will be somebody to catch you and your parachute will never be needed again.

  • sylviasearcher

    Those pieces will rise up stronger.
    They will be repieced through endeavour into something more beautiful than ever before.

  • Neville

    safe and happy landings are always much preferred... go well friend.... N

  • Claudelle DeLuna

    Excellent poem!
    Regardless of difficulties.....
    one can always get back together!

  • psychofemale

    thanks guys, i am actually happily married...some of these are old but favs of mine....i still feel they need to be shared because they are pieces of makes me who i am today :)

  • Denise

    I love the manner in which this is given, even down to the placement in which it written, got me in the feels lady. ❤️

  • psychofemale

    thank you so much for the positive feedback its much appreciated

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