The Opposite of Up

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  Fay Slimm. January 15th, 2019 10:20

  Inventive and compelling this read on the state of being between the ups and downs - first rate writing Sylvia.

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    sylviasearcherJanuary 15th, 2019 10:22

    Thanks Fay, at least my shameful woeful feeling produced something today!

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  Michael Edwards January 15th, 2019 11:46

  A super write dear Sylvia.

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    sylviasearcherJanuary 16th, 2019 02:30

    Thanks Michael. I will write of a rainbow one day soon!

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  Neville January 15th, 2019 12:16

  The opposite of up is impossible to definitively define from a global perspective given that 'up' is a culturally subjective concept ... just as we, or many of us at least struggle to appreciate for example the Inuit Indian has somewhere in the region of fifty words for snow... I like this poem though and there are certainly parts of it that I would be very proud of, if I had thought of them first.... I hope you start to feel more elevated soon.... N 🙂

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    sylviasearcherJanuary 16th, 2019 02:33

    You have put the U2 song in my head now. But it's okay because bono is my other unrequited soulmate!
    
    Ahhh these feelings of mine are all fleeting, just the uncomfortable ones are always more likely to make a poem.
    
    Thanks for your kind comment.
    
    I wonder which type of snow we have forecast on Friday?

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    NevilleJanuary 16th, 2019 03:53

    my pleasure.. I imagine it might be number 49.....