Its never empty!

Poetic Dan

The most silent thing is what's inside

So loud you will hear nothing go by

To push past all the aches and pains

Only to find out it was probably in vain

The mind will keep it going insane

As it can't let go of all the happenings

No matter your patience you'll be asked for more

If eager enough to fight then it comes to your door

I know I'm not the only one that mental stress has hold of

Days or weeks, even months can go passed

Negative words keep flying in

You hear that inner voice dim

You've done the best you can do

Someone will always disapprove

Never the less the weight is big

Trying to calm down everything

There is no need to scream & shout

As those peoples words will fade out

Everything rises and everything falls

But the mind can go beyond it all

For now I'll keep training mine to do better than before

As right now it's in a battle within many wars

 

Does this humble pie go on forever

Or

Is it the price to pay to sit at this table

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 15th, 2019 12:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: Another write to ride my wave of life!
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Fay Slimm.

    I once read Dan that the mind has power but not over will - there is a lot of food for thought in this well crafted piece of work.

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you, I'm still looking over it myself to see more of the emotions that are driving this feeling at the moment.

    • Goldfinch60

      The mind can be the most powerful thing to resurrect you, just think of the good in your life and look to the future that that good will do for you.

      • Poetic Dan

        Forward and creating thank you for being here my friend



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