The light dims
It seems as though
It won’t shine brightly
Will never again
The mist descends
Shrouding the world
In a hazy glow
Will not go
Life’s full eclipse
Blackening skies
As though undercover
Will not recover
Will I ever
Forever have the will
To be who I want to be
By my free will.
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Author:
The Retired Bloke (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Delving into my darker side.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments2
Good different usage of just one important word. Needed question asked as a finalé Thank you for this interesting read.
Thank you Fay.
The answer is certainly yes, your free will will lead you to the light in your world.
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