A sadness in my soul
Just won't let me be
A hole in my heart
Just won't let me sleep
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Author:
Sora (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I hurt my only friend last night I didn't mean to but she was with her man I got jealous because I wish she were mine so i left without a word and she got mad now I think she may hate me and its breaking my heart
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
Thanks for your POEM ~ FRIEND ! It is always sad when we (unwittingly) hurt someone by our Words or Actions ~ especially someone Special ! Im 35 and Ive done it lots of times ~ but time does heal !
Thanks for your comments on todays Poem ~ pleased you understood ~ sometimes poems can be too enigmatic. I love my verbal exchanges with OUTBACK ! I think what was saying to you was ~ WHY should we be constrained by the rules of POETIC FORM (5 7 5 for Haiku & Seneryu ~ 14 lines for a Sonnet ~ Acrostics ~ Vilanelles etc ? Personally I think we should. Discipline in Poetry is essential otherwise it is just Poetic ANARCHY ~ OK ?
Your MPS Friend BRIAN !
But with Poetic Anarchy feelings can be expressed in a much stronger way, as You know Brian I do not follow any strict rules when I write as I want to get the meaning over rather than correct poetry form. The only exception is Haiku and Senryu which must be 5-7-5 and they must comply to the rules, Haiku for nature and seasons, Senryu for emotions.
Try apologising to her man.
love it, but i want to read more 🙂
The time will come when all will be well again or that you will realise that you must move on, the person for you is out there.
Good emotive write though.
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