Lust’rous leaves once laughed and leap’d
Full of colour ‘neath her feet
And as the skylines turned to grey
So Autumn’s carpets saved the day
Berries bursting flavours full
Where birds got fat on grassy gnoll
The crunch of nature’s nest a hymn
Begat the words which cherubs’ sing
Nature showed her cards so briefly
Completeness sensed but not completely
Revealing Beauty amidst its Truth
Then tumbling forth at Season’s use
Blowing leaves in gusts and rain
What once was full has turned to grey
The icy arm of empty’s endless reaching fist
Veil’d in a murky melancholic mist
Perchance a time for hibernation?
Rested for rejuvenation?
Trees stand empty. Trees stand still.
Whose will is Winter set to fill?
Stumbling on through eyes glazed grey
We see the end begin today
Is the end a chance for new beginning?
Or declaration of a world stopped spinning?
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sylviasearcher,
A fine write complemented by a great Sylvia Plath quote!
One may
“see the end begin today”...
whereas another
“the end is a chance for new beginning”!
I enjoyed this read!
~Laura~
Thank you as always for your kind words 🌟
My pleasure! I truly enjoy reading your work! When will your book be published?
😊
Well I want to finish it before I'm 40 which gives me 18 months. But who knows it it will ever be published! That is in the hand of fate and how good/ terrible the reading of it is.
I feel more certain I will finish it though.
Kind words like yours encourage me!
I’m glad you’re encouraged because I really want to read that book of yours!
I’ve only been on this site for 15 months and I have purchased and read three MPS members’ published writings! I’m also enjoying a member’s lyrics set to music. An awesome CD!
They are super!
So I wish and hope that yours will be next!
🤗🌻
Well fingers crossed! Or if noone publishes it I could always send it chapter by chapter!
Your kind comments are always appreciated. 😌💜🌈
That’s a great idea 💡🤗
Super poem with great lines - enjoyed.
Thanks for reading and enjoying 😌
Hibernation and rejuvenation " wow I like the word choice that you employ for your poem and the imagery and muse all combined so artistically wow. Kudos.
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,
Thanks for the kudos 😌
Excellent read Sylvia - - love all the metaphors along with fine rhyming.
Thanks Fay 💜
this is my new favourite poem of yours sylviasearcher a real good un.... N
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