Wicked smart (Brooklyn accent)
Theta was here, wondering what he was up to since theta looked up to him since they weren’t so different he was just older and more responsible.
- Cut from the same cloth but you were first of the herd
I was the last but you are exactly like me so I have heard
- Quiet and reserved yet smart but lazy as sloth that is blind
It seems that there more than blood that has is the strong bind
- For you are brilliant more than I can ever or even dream
You already have discovered yourself and have create a family
And yet
Fire
Discipline
Desire
And unlimited
- You have made me into icarus but i won’t hesitate and neither fail
I am young and patient so not now but later I will surely prevail
- You injected me with motivation followed by angst and spunk
So bring it on old man my oldest sibling I’ll show that i’m no longer a runt
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Author:
Ernie (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Mornin my fellow poets it hope you all have a wonderful day and always feedback is welcome, - T the scholar
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Comments4
A fine write T.
thx for the kind words
Great form interesting write BRAVO
Thank you for the kind words Mr Forrest
As Icarus do not fly too close to the sun so showing him your wisdom.
indeed
The wings of youth as mentioned by your tribute to sibling wisdom make this read a flight of reality Theta - - closer than close become some kith and kin - - rightly 'tis more than blood binds - - an inspiring read my friend.
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