It's time to move on she speaks
as he thinks she'll always be around
to catch him, to wait for him
now what is lost, is found
Tired of waiting she speaks softly
as he still imagines her waiting
on him
when he needs her
but when she needs him
he's no where
no where to be found
It's a never ending story
until one of the two breaks it
ends it
She stands profoundly
and proud
and says it's over
the sad part,
he has no idea.
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psychofemale (Pseudonym) (
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Nice!
Some people just do not realise when relationships do not work.
Good emotive write.
A fine write P/F. I have no idea me self! heehee.
sometimes, there is no other way... that's just the way it has to be.... nice... Neville...... I mean the poem not me... I'm not nice really.... N
Thanks for sharing this FRIEND ~ All MEN should read it and take note ! Some MEN can be very selfish & unfeeling. They see their FEMALE Partners as someone to be there 24/7 to meet their every whim ! They give scant attention to the lady's needs ! Thank GOD some ladies do think ENOUGH is ENOUGH and just (if they can ?) walk away ! I have never been like that ~ but Im not married yet ! Yours as always BRIAN
thank you all for commenting and reading 🙂 means the world
Hilarious ending. Brilliant!
haha thanks 🙂
Like the form and flow.
thanks 🙂
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