How does it feel?
As I kneel
And reveal
All of me
How does it end?
As I fold and bend
And upon you descend
All of you
How will you know?
Is it my mouth that will show
That it’s me you adore
All of me
How will I trust
Blindfolded and cuffed
Softly yet rough
All of you
How will I submit?
To your will and your wit
Make my body befit
All of you
All of me waiting
All of me knows
All of me taken
All of me shows
How does it feel?
As I kneel
And reveal
All of me
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Author:
sylviasearcher (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Fancied a change I’m not good at these kinds of poems... I’m better at erotic fiction but don’t take requests... Did I just type that?
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Comments3
what an exquisite bit of erotica, if you dont mind me saying so.. tis certainly another favourwrite of this old man 🙂
You are so kind...
I feel like my writing may be a bit off lately.
well this one and the last couple were bang on.... and I am not kind... I am honest tho
See at least I’m as bad at receiving compliments as i am at giving them.
Thank you
How’s that?
will settle for a draw...
I could let you win if you try really hard
maybe............
Your writing isn't off here Sylvia. An inspired write.
Thanks Michael. I was experimenting... with my writing. And with making myself blush!!
Only with your writing? Lol
I am also hilarious you know!
All this may be wonderful but in submission... you only submit to yourself.
I think that is true.
If there is trust it is only ever yourself.
But don't tell anyone 😉
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