sylviasearcher

Adoration

How does it feel?

As I kneel

And reveal  

 

All of me  

 

 

How does it end?

As I fold and bend

And upon you descend  

 

All of you   

 

 

How will you know?

Is it my mouth that will show

That it’s me you adore  

 

All of me  

 

How will I trust

Blindfolded and cuffed

Softly yet rough  

 

All of you  

 

How will I submit?

To your will and your wit

Make my body befit 

 

All of you

 

All of me waiting

All of me knows

All of me taken

All of me shows    

 

How does it feel?

As I kneel

And reveal  

 

All of me

 

Comments5

  • Neville

    what an exquisite bit of erotica, if you dont mind me saying so.. tis certainly another favourwrite of this old man :)

    • sylviasearcher

      You are so kind...
      I feel like my writing may be a bit off lately.

      • Neville

        well this one and the last couple were bang on.... and I am not kind... I am honest tho

      • 4 more comments

      • Michael Edwards

        Your writing isn't off here Sylvia. An inspired write.

        • sylviasearcher

          Thanks Michael. I was experimenting... with my writing. And with making myself blush!!

          • Michael Edwards

            Only with your writing? Lol

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          • dusk arising

            All this may be wonderful but in submission... you only submit to yourself.

            • sylviasearcher

              I think that is true.
              If there is trust it is only ever yourself.
              But don't tell anyone 😉

            • Santita

              Oh this is a wonderful surprise! I love that this offers just enough detail to entice the reader, and let their minds wander with it.
              This is a piece of soulful erotica. Beautifully scribed!

              • sylviasearcher

                Thanks Santita
                I was experimenting but I am glad there is just enough to entice and that I managed to retain my soul.

                I felt nervous posting this one! 😳

              • Unsub

                sylvia,

                you've just discoved your niche.

                So perfectly crafted, so much imagery with such little information.

                You don't take requests? Shame as I'd ask for a book of these.

                So much deeper meanings held just below the surface of the words.

                Sublime.

                Unsub.

                • sylviasearcher

                  Well you made me blush and it is not even 8 am.

                  It was never the niche I intended to craft but hey!

                  Thanks unsub, for taking the pallor from my cheek!



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