Forecast

Netashi

Painted sky

Theta was here, slightly confused for his friend was complaining that it was raining and yet the sky was clear as day while we sat on the hill I turned to his face. I now understood and realized it was raining that day

 

  • Deaf & quiet yet ears still uncontrollably roaring

Is there a god and if so why does he do this without any warning

  • Why must he retake his inventions his art and beauty

I’ve been left with nothing making her smile was my duty

  • Only memory is left bittersweet and left restless

For I wake up to the voice of her knowing there are no echoes just stress

  • I feel she watches over me for I'm not sad but feel cheated

For I was always there for her and she was all i needed

  • But i sit here on this hill wet without any rain knowing i won’t see her again

They say when someone dies angels cry but the sky looked the most beautiful than it’s ever been

 

  • Author: Ernie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 4th, 2019 12:12
  • Comment from author about the poem: Good morning my fellow poets, i hope you have a wonderful day. As always feedback is always welcomed. - Theta the scholar They say when a painter dies he or she can paint the sky anyway they see fit.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Netashi

    Ironically published on a rainy day.

  • Fay Slimm.

    A heart-wrenching lament over the loss of a loved one - - a powerful set of couplets with an outstanding rhyme scheme - - well written but sad this posting Theta --

    • Netashi

      Indeed I felt i haven't written a sad piece in awhile my last couple of poems are mostly about feelings or requested poems.

    • psychofemale

      love the rhyme, you painted an awesome picture for your readers, i loved this last lines, so good

      • Netashi

        Im glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the generous words

      • Goldfinch60

        Those tears of angels are felt within oneself. Good write Theta.

        • Netashi

          Thank you for the kind words



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