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  Andrew Charles Forrest February 20th, 2019 05:23

  Beautiful...

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    sylviasearcherFebruary 20th, 2019 05:27

    Thanks Andrew Charles Forrest 😌

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  Neville February 20th, 2019 06:56

  I know that feeling, I know that need..
  
  you just proved yourself worthy of having the letters p.o.e. t. behind your name.. bravo ... N

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    sylviasearcherFebruary 20th, 2019 07:10

    I just proved myself worthy lol
    
    Thanks Neville, I think 🙃

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    NevilleFebruary 20th, 2019 07:13

    yes, you did.. now stop thinking and start accepting... oh' and for what it's worth, my bloomin pleasure.... N

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    sylviasearcherFebruary 20th, 2019 07:21

    I was thinking about the ‘just’

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    NevilleFebruary 20th, 2019 07:27

    No just about it.. if any one argues, except for you of course, there would be no justice whatsoever... take my word.... I know I'm write... N

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    sylviasearcherFebruary 20th, 2019 07:32

    I meant I was thinking about the just as in ‘only just’?

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    NevilleFebruary 20th, 2019 07:35

    That is precisely how I read ya... no only just about it... phew

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    sylviasearcherFebruary 20th, 2019 07:49

    Thanks Terthas, Neville has nearly read my entire catalogue, I’m wondering now if P.O.E.T stands for something else lol.
    
    Although to be fair I never really process to be a poet, I just wondered why now?

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  SerenWise February 20th, 2019 16:52

  beautifully written, nice use of language and rhymes 🙂

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    sylviasearcherFebruary 21st, 2019 02:20

    Thank you serenwise 🌟

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  Goldfinch60 February 21st, 2019 01:53

  This is very good and so much better when read out aloud. Beautiful.

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    sylviasearcherFebruary 21st, 2019 02:19

    Thank you for reading it out aloud 😌

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  Suresh February 25th, 2019 12:51

  Depth, there is in those words

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    sylviasearcherFebruary 26th, 2019 01:52

    Thanks Suresh 😌