Together Parted
Perfect pink petals parted
Strobe like light pulsing
Then together those waves hit
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: February 23rd, 2019 02:47
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A fine write N, but you have *robably *icked out all the 'p's (there's one sneaked in). No more left for me to '*ick u* a *enguin!'
Why don't I go back to bed and wake up again - talking rubbish!
thank you orchidee... bed sounds like a good idea to me... N
Excellent Neville this reads so many ways and with many meanings Perefct!
Bravo!
Thank you my very fine literary friend, you got it precisely.... I was wondering whether to open it up and see just how many variants we might come up with..... All Good Things to you & yours this fine Saturday mane.... Neville
Hello Neville.
Thank you this beautiful moment of poetry.
Keep writing FineB.
thank you my friend... many thank you's..... Neville
Ahhh - the way I read was naughty but subtly nice. A work to be proud of.
Cheers Michael, many thanks for the kind and insightful note... N
Like a stroll in a pretty meadow.
It made me think of Spring.
The words felt like I already knew them.
some words are just meant to be... thank you sylviasearcher .. you have made my today seem golden...
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