Together Parted

Together Parted


Perfect pink petals parted

Strobe like light pulsing

Then together those waves hit



  • orchidee

    A fine write N, but you have *robably *icked out all the 'p's (there's one sneaked in). No more left for me to '*ick u* a *enguin!'
    Why don't I go back to bed and wake up again - talking rubbish!

  • Neville

    thank you orchidee... bed sounds like a good idea to me... N

  • Andrew Charles Forrest

    Excellent Neville this reads so many ways and with many meanings Perefct!

    • Neville

      Thank you my very fine literary friend, you got it precisely.... I was wondering whether to open it up and see just how many variants we might come up with..... All Good Things to you & yours this fine Saturday mane.... Neville

    • FineB

      Hello Neville.

      Thank you this beautiful moment of poetry.

      Keep writing FineB.

      • Neville

        thank you my friend... many thank you's..... Neville

      • Michael Edwards

        Ahhh - the way I read was naughty but subtly nice. A work to be proud of.

        • Neville

          Cheers Michael, many thanks for the kind and insightful note... N

        • sylviasearcher

          Like a stroll in a pretty meadow.
          It made me think of Spring.

          The words felt like I already knew them.

          • Neville

            some words are just meant to be... thank you sylviasearcher .. you have made my today seem golden...

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