Thank you again

Poetic Dan

I can't believe my second open mic night
Read to fast and mixed up my words

Feel like I'm learning to walk again
Right now I'm in the crawling lane

The support I receive is life changing
To step out my comfort zone in a dream

So many to mention over the years
Now I'm putting good use to many tears

For once I break this final pattern of fear
I'll be the who that I'm longing to cheer

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 24th, 2019 16:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: What a way to end a Sunday and know of another on Wednesday. Hopefully I won't make excuses to do it 6 months apart but moving forward none the less ;)
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  • User favorite of this poem: Laura🌻.
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Comments4

  • Laura🌻

    Dan,

    I enjoyed reading this poem!
    I sense much positivity threaded within!
    Like a baby learning to walk...
    ...one step at a time...
    From the crawling lane...
    to the stand up lane...
    to the running lane!
    We’re all there to cheer you on ...
    and if you should stumble,
    ...DO NOT FEAR...
    we’re here to help you up!
    Nothing to fear!
    You’ll be just fine!

    ~Laura-~

    • Poetic Dan

      What an amazing rhythm is sure I'm going to sleep well after reading that, thank you so much.

      • Laura🌻

        My pleasure!😊

      • dusk arising

        Go for it man. Theres a person inside you waiting for his public. Your fears are falling away and any time now that geezer is gonna jump out from within you and frighten us all to bits - i hope!

        • Poetic Dan

          Hahaha! Yes boss, it's going to come with a band new cockyness!
          I'm proud to be me and honored to know you!

        • Goldfinch60

          I am so pleased that you are finding your way, yes mistakes happen but the support that you are getting more than make up for that. Go forth to that open mike Dan, go forth.

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you, I shall keep striving forth my friend

          • orchidee

            Don't invite me to the open mic session - I will only sing! heehee. Who can bear it?! Go on stage and take the mic - before I jump in and sing!

            • Poetic Dan

              I best keep hold of it then but I'm sure you would soon bring a crowd 😉

              • orchidee

                Aww, why they all leave the room when I took up the mic?! heehee. They are horrible to me. lol.



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