She always tells me I'm attractive when I feel it the least
Right now my mind is burning every think on its list
The view I have is amazing but I'm consciously blocking out
Stuck between a dream and shadows of inner doubt
As a kid I hated walking now it's what I do for a job
At school I despised writing English now I just can't stop
The things in life that happen you'd never of even thought
Like seeing how long you can grow your hair before going bald
I need to lighten up my mood so I'll remind myself and maybe you
This world needs nothing more from us
Than to just breath in love
No schedule or expectations, no lateness or performance
The only thing it will ask from you
Is to live in the moments truth
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A fine write Dan. I hated The Canterbury Tales in English at a school. Double whammy, as I couldn't understand half of it in ye olde language. Then read it in modern version and enjoyed it - seeing as I then knew what the author was on about!
Thank you it felt good to get it of my chest.
Dan...Absolutely bang on the truth there mate! I couldn't agree more.
Your second line made me laugh out loud.
Springtime ahead is lightening up and you are too... so make sure you have a brill year.
I bet you've found that, if you make yourself do some of the things you dread, they're not so dreadful after all.
You are so right, I have been thinking of writing about how the winter months and darker days feel like they are getting harder as I get older! 5.30 sun set now whoop whoop!
What great observations here
too many truth bells for my liking but I ooved this work
Well done Dan
Hahaha I the bells and cockle shells if you'll TBD would stop!
Thank you ever so much
Good positive write Dan. Each of those moments are so important value each one.
Thank you Good sir I shall keep on trucking them along with me!
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