In a stride to forget

Poetic Dan

People can see it very quick
Whether I'm in the mood for it

 

In the eye of my storm
I see how I need you all

 

Outside of this, it's as if
I need none of you to exist

 

In the tears of my anger
Through the hole in my gut

 

Stillness finds a home
Where no thoughts do roam

 

Darkness becomes a friend
None other do I depend

 

Not even a paper and pen
In a stride to forget everything

 

Yet a deep yearning pulls me back in
Asking if I'm done doing it all again

 

Happiness is my choice, one I can struggle to make
In a life of just a dream, when it can all become so fake

 

This mind is not mine to control
Through the looking glass of a soul
The weather does what it always will
Moved by the pressure of this world

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 6th, 2019 08:55
  • Comment from author about the poem: A rhyme a day to find where I left my reality, as today I should of just not woke up. Obviously I'm glad that I did ;)
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  • poetboy123

    Wherever it rains, we must build umbrellas until it passes. Great seeing your work again, it's been a while Dan!

    • Poetic Dan

      Yes or learn to dance and sing in it, it's a new day, it's me dawn it's a new light...
      Always appreciate see you my friend

    • Goldfinch60

      The pressure in the world changes all the time and that pressure will ease form your mind leaving you free and refreshed.

      • Poetic Dan

        As I am this morning and feel your words resonate. Thank you my friend and may your dayd be pleasant

      • JaydeVictoria

        This really hit home for me, I got from this the hope but the darkness always seems more inviting, familiar somehow..
        Really good write! x

        • Poetic Dan

          Spot on, thank you

        • Neville

          I have read your post today several times and am still not sure whether there is far more here than immediately hits the eye.. your authors note has got me thinking... I do sense a certain fragile uncertainty.... I can be wrong.... I certainly was way back in 1974..... I will read your words again later my friend..... Neville

          • Poetic Dan

            Haha that really made me chuckle, I'd lend you my time machine but it won't go back pay 1981 😉

            There is so much more to this..

            • Neville

              write on my friend...



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