JaydeVictoria

Breath of life

 

 

Is it love that runs deep through my veins,

pumping blood to my metaphoric heart?

Each beat resuscitates, regenerates and revitalises  

the darkest crevices of my soul.

 

It is a medicine, sweet and tender;

absorbed by true loves kiss

and travels through my bloodstream lightning fast,

as though my body craves it.

 

The warmth it brings spreads right through

the tips of my fingers and toes;

and as she holds her hands in mine,

I know I warm her too.

 

A pulsing glow emits around her

awakening my synapses.

As she kisses me again

a ball of air rises towards my chest,

 

she has breathed life into me!

 

I think this is what love feels like.

I’ll never knew who I was before her.

 

Please don’t break my heart again.

 

Comments11

  • Neville

    delightfully deeper the more oft read... N )

  • Fay Slimm

    The power of love - -and so beautifully expressed.

  • orchidee

    Good write JV.

  • Michael Edwards

    A beautiful poem and having such great metre it rolls off the tongue and reads so easily and well - great write Jayde

    • JaydeVictoria

      I'm so glad you think so, thank you :)

    • Poetic Dan

      Yes, yes and yes again with every word right till the end. I felt my heart drop with your pen, then felt it start right up again. Through all the heat breaks I've had in my life, now to this day to be thankful in alive!
      This was such an inspiring write!

      • JaydeVictoria

        What a wonderful comment to receive today, thank you Poetic Dan, your visit is much appreciated and your poetry is thoroughly enjoyed :)

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        Many thanks JAYNE for a really heart touching Love Poem. Angela & I have written openly about our Love. Your Lovely Love Poem reflects the same feelings ! True Love does indeed Resusitate - Regenerate - Revitalise ~ It is indeed a Medicine of sweet & tender Kisses and it does warm the whole Body ! True Love is always EXOTHERMIC ! ANGELA has breathed Life into Me and I into Her !
        Every blessing with your New found Love !
        Yours through Love Poetry
        BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

        • JaydeVictoria

          And I truly admire your devotion to one another, it is truly lovely to see, thank you for reading x

        • Joe Dawson

          Nothing mediocre here, just a heartfelt lesson in love, truth and survival. You write very well indeed and you should be proud of yourself and your poetry. Joe

          • JaydeVictoria

            That is a truly lovely thing to say and I really appreciate your visit! Thank you :)

          • FineB

            Hello Jayde Victoria.

            A beautiful poem on the power of Love.

            Thank you

            Keep writing FineB!

            • JaydeVictoria

              Thank you so much FineB, I am honoured you enjoyed my poem and thank you so much for reading

            • Angela1711

              This is one of my favourite reads so far. Esp love the opening. Saved to re-read again and again. Much love x

              • JaydeVictoria

                That is very kind, I am so honoured! Glad you enjoyed x

              • Suresh

                Love is addictive
                Nicely penned.

                • JaydeVictoria

                  That is very true and thank you very much x

                • brooklyn6timesplus

                  Nicely written poem here JaydeVictoria! With every breath, some people come to life !



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